雅思写作 “结尾太草率”?2 个升华技巧让收尾有力

发布日期:2025-09-16 23:25    点击次数:88

雅思写作结尾总用 “From what has been discussed above, we can conclude that...”,草草收尾,无法体现思考深度。其实用 “总结 + 展望” 和 “总结 + 建议”,就能让结尾更有分量。

“总结 + 展望” 延伸视野。先简要总结中间论点,再联系 “未来” 或 “更大范围” 升华:比如写 “环保的重要性”,结尾可以说 “In conclusion, protecting the environment can reduce pollution and protect biodiversity. In the future, if everyone takes small actions like recycling waste, our planet will become more sustainable.” 先总结 “环保的两个好处”,再展望 “未来人人行动的效果”。

“总结 + 建议” 落地现实。先总结核心观点,再提出具体建议:比如写 “线上课的优势”,结尾可以说 “To sum up, online courses are flexible and accessible for students. Schools and educational institutions should further improve online resources to help more students benefit from this learning method.” 先总结 “线上课的两个优势”,再建议 “学校优化资源”。

展开剩余11%

要是不知道怎么升华结尾,同桌中教一对一的老师能帮你。他们会整理不同话题的 “结尾升华范例”,教你 “展望”“建议” 等方法;还会批改你的结尾,指出 “哪里太草率”,帮你优化;现在有试听课。

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